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| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseThis is brilliant. There is passion in every line. It's really wonderful. I love your ending line. Just one question (and please pardon my ignornace) Who is Salahadin? I've never heard of this person. I get that he's a warrior but what did he do? Whom did he invade. this is brilliant. |