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Reviews For: Under The Skin

Sexy vampirechick
2008-05-02
ch 1,
abuseWoW! I like the ending.It was shocking a total twist. The Spanish was nice too.It made me feel good 'cause I can understand it hehe :).

What I also enjoyed was how Athena lead Andrew on.It was described very well.

The only thing I would've changed was the last line.I think that made the ending a bit weak for some reason.
Luperca
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuseWhoa! Surprise ending! I totally wasn't expected the she to be an ... it. Haha, great story. :3
A Right Kind of Wrong
2008-04-18
ch 1,
abuseOMG the last part caught me off guard!

Nice story, it was kinda funny.
to be a Phoenix
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseoh my damn

just when i thought that there was gonna be a hot taxi scene... she becomes a s/he.

i actually started laughing when that happened
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