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| Sexy vampirechick 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseWoW! I like the ending.It was shocking a total twist. The Spanish was nice too.It made me feel good 'cause I can understand it hehe :). What I also enjoyed was how Athena lead Andrew on.It was described very well. The only thing I would've changed was the last line.I think that made the ending a bit weak for some reason. |
| Luperca 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseWhoa! Surprise ending! I totally wasn't expected the she to be an ... it. Haha, great story. :3 |
| A Right Kind of Wrong 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseOMG the last part caught me off guard! Nice story, it was kinda funny. |
| to be a Phoenix 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseoh my damn just when i thought that there was gonna be a hot taxi scene... she becomes a s/he. i actually started laughing when that happened |