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| Tranquil Thorns 2008-05-03 ch 1,  | abuse'Clouds pale and gray envelope the sky in sleep,' - I think you mean 'envelop', as in wrap. Envelope is what you send letters in. =P Anywho, this is a very sweet poem. (: I especially like the fact that you started off with 'and'. It makes the poem seem like a part of something larger. Keep writing! |