 patsylooj 2009-07-20 . chapter 1Harrowing and seriously beautiful. This is what a writer should aim for. |
 EAV 2009-02-04 . chapter 1 Alyssa. This was probably one of the few stories that have drawn me in almost completely. Even though it was a short story, I felt like I knew this person. It seemed like I wasn't really in this world but in the story's. My favorite line was this: "It’s hard to make people see rainbows again when they want things to be grey." This just was plain amazing. |
 Sarah 2008-12-02 . chapter 1 Wow, I love it. If I knew anything about writing I would be able to tell why exactly I love it so much but I don't so I'll just stick with saying I love the way you put together words. I hope you get the scholarship, you deserve it. |
 Carnivale 2008-09-21 . chapter 1This is gorgeous. I loved it from the first sentence. Andi was really well-portrayed. I wish I knew someone like him. xD I hope you get your scholarship! |
 Greasy HUMAN Babies 2008-04-20 . chapter 1This is so emotional. I love it. |
 crazyspeedingcar 2008-04-20 . chapter 1This is really beautifully written. I hope you get your scholarship-- you deserve it! |