I LOVE the way this story is starting off, and I do hope you continue with it.

Sweet! Love it, but wish for a longer chapter!

aw thank you so much! haha. There were a couple sentences I would switch around, and remember that thoughts are in italics; but the overall content was good. Keep it up, and if you ever need help with anything, let me know :)
Faith

Oh how creepy, but how do you fall in love with a dude that smells dead? I liked to see this, Update soon!

this has potential. There were a couple grammatical errors, such as saying your instead of you're, things like that. Just be careful for those. And pace yourself, you don't want to give too much away too soon. Keep it up, and update soon :)
Faith

Ah, my dear-dear girl.
You've finally come back to us at last, huh?
Well this is a great start for something great,
I did see you make some mistakes, but don't we all.
I can't wait to see what you make of this.
Great ideas as always, I envy you.
Please update soon.
Kisses.