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| Racquet 2008-10-01 ch 14,  | abuseYou do that and I'll wait, sounds like a plan eh? Love your story though, hopefully you end up making it better than the way you intended. ~Racquet |
| xx.Shattered.Reality.xx 2008-09-30 ch 14, | abuseAw, darn. I was so happy for another chapter. Anyway...hope the updates go well. I hope I'll enjoy the updates, but the old story will forever hold a place in my mind. :) P. S. Maybe not. My memory's not actually that good. |
| Nerdette 2008-09-28 ch 14, | abuseGood stuff. Please update soon. |
| menace in training 2008-09-28 ch 9, | abuseLove this story, it's amazing and i wouldn't change a thing about it!! |
| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-09-27 ch 13, | abusePhew...I can breath again. That was so scary! What's awesome is that you're really good at the spy stuff, so it seems kind of real. Keep up the amazing work! :) |
| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-09-27 ch 12, | abuseI'm terrified. Did you know that? Well, I am. |
| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-09-27 ch 11, | abuseYAY! I LOVE Jaymie and Nick together...they're adorable. I can't wait to see what happens with Mitchell! :) |
| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-09-27 ch 9, | abuseNice...I loved this chapter! :) Jamie and Nick are adorable together. Too bad that they're "cousins". Excellent description, as usual. |
| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-09-27 ch 8, | abuseThis is awesome...I love! The idea is really cool, and I love how they're so...rich and snobby. Or at least pretending to be. Excellent description! :) |
| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-09-27 ch 7, | abuseSo I was right about the other winner being a decoy like thing. And um...wow...great chapter! :) |
| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-09-27 ch 6, | abuseWhat's happening? *GASP!* Was Stacey a decoy? I can't wait to find out! :) |
| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-09-27 ch 5, | abuseA drinking problem? The perfect little girl has problems i see...don't get me wrong, I love Jaymie as a main character. I just like getting to know character's darker, more evil sides to. Great job! :) |
| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-09-27 ch 4, | abuseWow...talk about intense. It's crazy there! But it sounds like so much fun! :) |
| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-09-27 ch 3, | abuseYEAH! Go jamie and nick! And Jamie sounds like tons of fun. Gray leggings and a skirt is the girls training uniform? Talk about sexist...ha ha, jk. Great chapter! :) |
| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-09-27 ch 2, | abuseSounds pretty, but is there a catch? Oh...:0 ha ha. Great job! |