Reviews for Caramel Macchiato

Reviews For: Caramel Macchiato

CrazyJujube 2008-05-12 ch 4,	abuseYes, well, who cares when they're giggle fuckable? That would be like saying I can't have my coffee in a green cup because its freaking taller than my other cups or some shizznazi. I mean Mango is like my God of hyper/randomness and I am going to offer him some of my chocolate... after its all gone!
mandraco 2008-05-09 ch 3,	abuseI like this story. It amuses me. =) Mandraco.
CrazyJujube 2008-05-09 ch 3,	abuseMango is HOT! I love this story! Im excited! OMGZ!! I'm... shaking?
Sammius 2008-05-03 ch 2,	abuseHahah, chapter two was very enjoyable -- it was long, it wasn't too fast-paced, and as always with your stories, it was very well-written. Hm... I think I need to go find other people to comment on -- I'm clouding your review pages. =P Anyway, a cliff-hanger chapter -- wow! Hahah, hurry up with that next chapter. ;)
ContemplativeJoyce 2008-04-27 ch 2,	abuseThis is very interesting.. I'm really curious of how the characters are going to interact with each other. Good job so far though :)
Sammius 2008-04-17 ch 1,	abuseRight; so I'm assuming this isn't a one-shot? Hm... I've yet to read your other stories, although I do like what I've read so far. Like I said in the last review (whether you read it or not, I have no way of knowing), your grammar and such could still use improvement, but no one is perfect. This story was pretty good, especially since it's onle the beginning. (I'm not going to compare it to the last one I read, because then I would have no opinion) Have you planned anything out ahead of time? Anyway, yeah, back to the story. =P Honestly, I was thinking, "Was Tuesday really a girl pretending to be a guy?" but then I realized that would be a bit convenient: they were both liars, hahah! What I'm most interested in is seeing how these characters develope; for example, is this how Tuesday normall acts (calm about these types of things), or is he really just acting while Mango's mother is around? Either way, if you do write more, I'd be glad to see what you do write. Sorry if this review doesn't really... construct, much, but it's the best I could come up with, really. Hahah, looking forward to more chapters.

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