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| Isca 2008-05-13 ch 1,  | abuseAMAZING! |
| MR.SEAN 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI love the beat of the repeating words you have used in this piece... I guess thats where the metronome comes in. |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuse'The distance like knives' - I really liked that line. It conveys a feeling without you actually stating it. I like that it's done through a simile, an image. I also like the short, quick lines. In a way, the rhythm is almost like a pulse. It may sound weird, or it might be just the way I read it, but that's a thought that jumped out at me. Nice. (: |