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| Twilight Starr 2008-07-04 ch 1,  | abuseDramatic, short story. Nice work. Keep writing! Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Chip Douglas 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. It's amazing what you can fit into 400 words or so! It was a little confusing to know what part was looking back at the dream and what part was after she woke up though. Maybe you intend it, or maybe consider putting the dream in italics. Great story! |
| The Astronaut 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseThanks for your review of my story, "Scientists"! Much appreciated. I like this, especially the description of the rain and the way the white gown clings to her body. Very pretty. Good job! xoxo, The Astronaut |