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A Written Escape 2009-11-26 . chapter 19
idk if i already reviewed to this (wouldn't be surprised if i did, this story is SO GOOD), but i was just wondering... not to be nosey or annoying or anything (sorry if im coming off that way), but i was just wondering if you were going to keep up with the story.

tis been a WHILE since you last updated, and you kind of left us all on a cliffhanger here! D:
so, just a little... inquiry from a really--REALLY interested reader.

i hope u are still planning to update --> :D
sneaky-fox 2009-10-27 . chapter 19
Love it Love it Love it! It's really good and you make both Maxim and Gen very lovable :) please update soon! and I wanna see some more Maxim + Gen action ;)
MoonCrisis 2009-10-04 . chapter 19
Lovely story. Very well written. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter...I agree with AgamiMuffin that the story unless in a later chapter it will have a sex scene or violence, I don't think the story needs an "M" rating. Keep up the good work! ;)
Miss Bitterbiscuit 2009-09-28 . chapter 19
OMG! Please update soon, I really want to see what happens on Gen's date!
ThePureAndSimpleTruth 2009-09-27 . chapter 19
This is fantastic! I am hoping they get together soon, though. It hurts me to see Maxim so lonely...even though Gen is _right_ there! :D I'm avidly waiting for an update. :D
Eccthlacine 2009-08-31 . chapter 19
Like the story so far. And I'm sorry if you've already heard this but it's terribly slow. For a story in which it's a play by play of daily life (which are often horribly boring and unreadable) it's very well written, and not once have I been bored. Though I have been impatient! Lol. Unless you plan for them to have somewhat or very graphic sex later on or for someone to die a violent, graphic, horrible death, I don't think the story warrants the M rating. But overall its very good and I like Maxim's character- most tend to lean towards either the affectionate jerk or the courteous, strong, and sometimes silent type, but you achieve a balance of both nicely. Can't wait to read another chapter!
chicagobabe 2009-08-27 . chapter 19
lol loved this chapter, you so gotta update son cant wait for the next chapter!
chicagobabe 2009-08-26 . chapter 8
Busted! lol funny chapter loved it :d
chicagobabe 2009-08-26 . chapter 3
loved this chapter :).
NeverSometimes 2009-08-25 . chapter 1
I would just like to say that, before having read a single word of your story, that I already love it because of the title. It's cute and clever and has just the right amount of cliche in it to make me want to read the story based on the title alone.

-Andrea.
chicagobabe 2009-08-25 . chapter 1
oh im hocked already ahah, loved it!
Lisa Marie M. 2009-08-20 . chapter 19
okay. seriously. I LOVE this story. Honest to god, it is very very VERY well written and I think you should probably update soon! Please visit http://fpsupernaturalawards./ , it is where I am a judge! -Lisa
SunlitSky 2009-08-15 . chapter 9
Oh Dear! This is quite the story. I love it. congrats on this fabulous creation, its utterly and completely hilarious. It is know 2 in the morning and I honestly can't stop letting out loud guffaws of laughter, I kid you not. My poor parents are right down the hall and undoubtedly about to shoot me and are probably convinced I've gone mad, they can't fathom what in the world has me in hysterics. (at 2 in the morning no less) This story is interesting and I appreciate how you explain the rules of your vampires (and that they flow seamlessly with the story). The plot line is perhaps not the most riveting, but your wit certainly makes up for it. The awkwardness and chemistry between the 2 characters is fabulous, and has kept me entertained all night. I can't wait to see what happens, keep up the good work. :)
M. Forthe 2009-08-11 . chapter 19
Okay, for one thing, I absolutely LOVE your powers of description. Wonderful writing. Even the chapter names fit well. I honestly have nothing more to say other than great job!

Oh, and for the record, I read your profile and I totally agree; 18th century fashion is a wonderously amazing thing. XD
Emmalaya 2009-08-05 . chapter 19
Ah... this is a great story! I love it and I flailed happily when I saw the lovely Green Day reference in that other chapter's title. :] Keep it up! Can't wait until the next update.
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