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| mPrOmPraNcE 2008-06-20 ch 4,  | abuseWoO-HoO! shhort chapters but all in all a good story.. please continue this., will be waiting for an udate..:P |
| Dreamless_Infinity 2008-05-30 ch 4, anon. | abuseIsn't Damien one of the "muscle heads" and Tobias her mate? (Pretty names, by the way)I'm kinda confused by that. Are you still looking for a beta? ~Dreamless~ |
| Kicon Of The Stars 2008-05-16 ch 4, | abuseNyah! Dun dun dun! I think (if I worked up enough nerve) I would slap him. ~Kicon |
| Htaed is Death backwards 2008-05-15 ch 3, | abuse-wailing-I DON'T GET IT! |
| Gabby 2008-05-14 ch 4, anon. | abuseUmm...I freakin' effing love this! Please continue. |
| pishposh 2008-05-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseisn't his name tobias?? |
| Ichigo Mirai 2008-05-13 ch 4, | abusethis is still really good!! please update when you can! ^_^ |
| Kicon Of The Stars 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abuseI trhink you meant: 'I wasn’t so surprised when strong arms wrapped around me and I was pressed against TOBIAS’s chest.' Instead of Damien. Really good! ~Kicon |
| PeterMoore 2008-05-06 ch 3, | abuseI love this story. I do hope you update soon please. I think it's absolutely hilarous. |
| Megan 2008-05-06 ch 3, anon. | abuseYay! Update! |
| Ichigo Mirai 2008-05-06 ch 3, | abusethis is still very very good!! please update when you can! ^_^ |
| Lyra Waterflame 2008-05-05 ch 3, | abuseLOL... Awesome fic so far! Please write more soon? PLEASE? |
| Ichigo Mirai 2008-04-30 ch 2, | abusethis is really good! please update when you get the chance! ^_^ |
| Ichigo Mirai 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abusethis is pretty good so far. can't wait to read what happens next! ^_^ |
| emrevolemina 2008-04-30 ch 2, | abusethis sounds nice :P but the lower portion's italisized. :P I like how you write though |