This is quite amusing (:

There's not that much to say, except the way you did the humor is fantastic and this is possibly one of the funniest poems I've ever read.

straight from the review marathon! (link on profile page)

ahahahaha, this is so good. XD i love how you combine typical romance/fluff poetry with this kind of grotesque weird sci-fi poetry. XD it's so funny.

i also love your rhyming... it works well and your rhythm is right on.

favorite line: "...feel its warmth as i relieve/you of your cerebrum" - hahaha... so good.

how did you come up with this? XD

good job! keep writing!

-Lefty

This is lovely. xD
But, no, seriously, I think this is one of the best poems I've read on the Internet. People often try to be far too deep and FAIL, whereas you didn't. You mixed depth and humor together to make a very unique poem, and the depth you had wasn't cheap depth, like most of the depth I see.
(How many times can I say depth in one paragraph? Ugh.)
But anyway,
the flow was very well done too. Good job!

Haha, this is genius!

That first 'as I unzip your head' caught me off-guard. =P
Love this! Thanks for the amusement.

LMAO=] How random... I love how it's half romantic and then half about... eating peoples brains=] Awesome piece