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Reviews For: Light and Shadow

Moon's Poetess
2008-07-02
ch 1,
abuse... arfgh, your poem endings are insanely good. I'd read every single poem just to see those. Also love the line, "Now you're gone, Like a warm breeze at night." Wow. Great metaphor.
simpleplan13
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseAgain some punctuation issues. I love the whole idea of the shadows wrapping you up and the contrast in the ending. Nice job.
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