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| Moon's Poetess 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuse... arfgh, your poem endings are insanely good. I'd read every single poem just to see those. Also love the line, "Now you're gone, Like a warm breeze at night." Wow. Great metaphor. |
| simpleplan13 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseAgain some punctuation issues. I love the whole idea of the shadows wrapping you up and the contrast in the ending. Nice job. |