Reviews for Sunshine and Chains

eraced 2008-07-02 ch 1,	abuseVery beautiful. And easy to relate to. My advise if you want it or not ** 'em! Do what you want to do. Do what you need to do, to make yourself happy. Beacuase life is to short and to long to not be happy. You can do it, you can break the chains and be you and do what you want and have you sunshine. Ok i'm going to stop now or i'll keep rambaling. I'm back, my comp's finally working. oK anyway hope you're doing ok. I'm always here if you need me. breathing for the bleeding.~erAced~
Galadh Niniel 2008-06-13 ch 1,	abuseGood images to express that contrast between the two worlds you describe. I hope you will find a compromise and a balance that does not drown out all the sunshine.
kloun doll 2008-06-12 ch 1,	abusethe first lines looked happy but the last lines not... anyway, I think it's a great poem.
sunday night sky 2008-06-11 ch 1,	abuseI really relate to this... it's sad how we waste our lives just fulfilling duties :( I really like this, a lot. Nice piece xx
simpleplan13 2008-04-18 ch 1,	abuseI really love those last two lines they were really great. The rest of it was nice too, but that part stuck out for me. Well done