WOH! Go Cassie!! Okay... I'm too in the story. Your from Philippines? Wow, is it in Luzon, Visayas or Mindanao?

I liked your story. It's a really creative idea, and I really love it ^_^

Aw ... really cute and sweet! Good job!

aww. cute. :D

Aw, how cute! :)

Aw!! They're so cute together...and I'm glad that Cassie realized the errors of her ways. Awesome oneshot. :)

Cute. The ending's a little over the top, but I suppose that's okay.

There were just two things that bothered me and that I'd suggest that you fix.

1) [Confusing, huh? Considering that Devin, Connor’s best friend, was holding Cassie’s waist. Well, to clear things up...the two most popular kids at their High School were single, available and hotter than ever.] Talk about blunt. You should've tried fitting this information smoothly into the story instead of throwing it at the reader. A subtle line or two would've been fine. And scratch the 'available and hotter than ever' part; it's annoying to see blatant conceit about characters coming from the author.

2) This ties in kind of with the previous part. [Why would Connor take an interest in her? She wasn’t a cheerleader, and she wasn’t even popular...She was normal, and that wasn’t right.] I liked Cassie up to this point, but this bit of one dimensional characterization made her seem like a generic fake flake. In essence, tone it down a bit. Other than that, I like that Cassie's logical and actually thinking things through. Good job on your oneshot.

improvement from the old one
but they both good :)

BRILLIANT STORY!
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oh. so cute and sweet!

What's up?

The ceiling.

Lol!

Well, I would have liked it better if they weren't both at the top of the social ladder. I guess I love the old Geek-Idol pair cliché. Anyway, I'd suggest a grammar/spelling check (There's a paragraph that confused me, the way you used verbal tenses was a tad weird: "Maybe he was going to break up with her in the near or far future, or maybe, she was going to be the one who would end the relationship. Maybe she’ll cry, and maybe he’ll be smirking. He’ll probably move on and so will she. She wouldn’t know unless she tried. All she wanted was for him to take her back.").

Hope that was helpful! Toodles!

Aww... I wish this wasn't a one-shot. D= It would have been good as a story too...maybe...who knows. It felt a bit rushed at the end but it probably would feel too long if you add more...

Well other than that, I thought that the story was very original and natural. The character were very realistic... (semi-)simple people are good. Some romance stories are just lovey-dovey but this is cute in another level.

Good job and excellent work. XDD

Well, I must say I like it.

The characters are pretty strong, which makes it easier to form opinions on them. Being able to do that, it was easy (for me) to be drawn into the story.

Another plus would be the dialogue. It was just so natural and flowing. Along with that the beats were just right, matching the character's speech perfectly.

Finally, I might as well add that the ending was just perfect. Romance isn't usually my genre of choice but this was just so sweet! How could anyone resist?

Great job here, I'm officially a fan.

That's good. I totally loved the last part :D

wow..that is good..i loved it...aw at least she got over her stage fright in a way i guess...that is good one shot.it would be nice if it did turn out into a story...bye...bye...