Very intriuging and something I actually enjoyed. It was sinister and bloody, two things I enjoy.

I like it. My top three favorite parts are when he's questioning his own sanity, when he can't say "I hate you" with conviction, and the ending. I enjoyed it a lot. What does that say about my charicter? Hmm...

Dark and beautifully written. This was a joy to read, though a little disturbing...as it was intended to be. Only one thing I can think to point out, was the first sentence intended to be repeated?

hm
very interesting.
i like it.

wow.. its .. well written.. a little bloodly

~ Dan