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| Reviews for The Amazing Life of Amaterasu Mizatomi |
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   Ragnarok Dark Princess 12/23/08 . chapter 1! I easily LOL over this story... |
| Bright Eyes 12/20/08 . chapter 10 Yay an update! I liked this chapter but the only suggestions I have are bolding the names and italizing the actions. I had to keep going back. So keep writing! Update soon! |
| guesswho 10/4/08 . chapter 1 yeah, so i was too lazy to actually change the stat of this for chaps 8/9 but it's 4 those...yeah. so to put it plainly, idk what to say.! |
| totally loving it 10/3/08 . chapter 9 PLOT TWIST! Anyway, er... Um... Yeah... I loved it! :D Update soon |
| Alice totally a pirate 9/24/08 . chapter 8 Okay, so, here's my review! I like the story and the concept and it makes me happy when you update :D But, could you pretty please make the actions a little bit eaiser to see/read. Because sometimes (I don't know why) I read it and I see -looks away- No. And my only reaction is, Whoah! Where'd that come from? Yes... That's it! Love it! |
| guesswho 8/14/08 . chapter 7 Oh the curse of knowing the writer! ...jk... Anyway, just post the next episode already! And a physical weakness wouldn't kill her, but I'm glad she fell off the tube. And again more MIzuko! Maybe a less buzzkill-ish one though...yeah. |
| avidreader again 8/14/08 . chapter 6 hello amaterasu.i read your new chapter, but i'm sorry to say it still seems a little mary sue-ish. in previous chapters, you said that the person who held izo atsushi and amami was the leader of an organization, so how could amami, a student, defeated him with one technique? and how does every guy like her? |
| Squigit 8/8/08 . chapter 1 Good, but not so many swear words next time. And you might want too be more explanitary in the character. And the Japanesse words, they don't make much sence. Mabey have a directory at the end explaining what the Japanesse words mean. Or you could me a bit more explantory. |
| Alice totally a pirate 7/31/08 . chapter 6 Yay Haruki! I loved this chapter. Keep on writing ;D |
| Alice not your bff jill 7/31/08 . chapter 5 I'm on the edge of my seat... |
| Alice not your bff jill 7/31/08 . chapter 4 Loved the chapter! |
| Alice is not a bear 7/31/08 . chapter 3 *edgeofseat* Must. Go. To. Next. Chapter. Now! (lovethechapter) |
| Alice totally a pirate 7/31/08 . chapter 2 I liked the story, but does like Amami have this magical power that gets guy to love her. If she does, I want to know how she got it. Mmkay, I liked the chapter and the ramen was great. Plz, gimme a pirate. Peace, Love, and Pirates -Alice |
| Alice not your bff jill 7/31/08 . chapter 1 Okay, so, I think this is a very good kick off chapter and I can't wait for more background on the characters and for fun stuffs. Peace, Love, and Soy Milk: - Alice |
| SodieAsh 7/25/08 . chapter 6 its awesome! the amami/atsushi part was so cute nd i loved it! keep it up! |
