I think that it doesn't need anything added. Anything else would just detract from the meaning

No wonder I'm bad at poetry, it confuses me so much! Lol. Yay, I can get on Fictionpress again!! Woot! Anyways, as much as poetry confuses me, I liked this. And to think I'm taking English as one of my classes this year... Oh, dear... Lol.

Interesting piece. Nice work. Keep writing!

~Twilight Starr~