Finally! Yay. I liked it although it was really short. I want you to finish TVNF. Good job.

Hm...I think I've read this chapter before. ^-^ Anyway great job as always on these two chapters. Keep it up Louise.

Yay Finally! Love It!! :)
Line 2 (the scratching of..)
Line 6 (She saw...)
Line 7 (making sure to twist just right so he..)
Just some spelling errors I know you would have caught them sooner or later. Thanks for the comment. I'm so glad you like my writing it's really encouraging. Love Yuh.
-JTD

I still hate both those names. You know which ones. lol But I can't wait to read how the story unfolds.