You know: the rhythm IS of...but it's perfectly fitted in my opinion. Syncopated...broken... fits in with the content really. I lurve it very much...it crunches like the ideal laughter pancake.
fun.
sad.
scratchy-wrist-fun...
...yeah...
haha
anyways: dear osh-bih-gosh
another gold star.
Congratumalations. these are the only things I've reviewed in about two weeks. Feel honoured, petty commoner. Tehehe: "yes I'm a **, just not yours"... cupcake was it?
Soz... ramblin off there...
S'later!
and love it (again)

This is a very good little poem. I loved the ending!