I left a review I wasn't happy with while signed in...could you delete and repost this story so it won't be there anymore...sorry its just been bugging me.

Twisted and interesting.

Oh I love it! Interesting so far! Please continue I want to read more!

"And her friend said unto her, 'What the hell are you doing?'"

that was beautiful in this cold, dark way. very gothic (in the old-fashioned sense of the word) atmosphere. i hope you do make it into more than a 'drabble' as it seems like it could have a lot of potential. i really enjoyed it so thank you :D

I think you could really turn this into a great story. I'd like to see what happens..why he's kept against his will, if he feels the same way towards his savior, if he ever will. My advice to you is to search yourself and take this drabble and turn it into something beautiful. :)

I hope you continue this

I like it so far :) I'd like to read more!