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| AmberMarieee 2008-05-09 ch 1,  | abuseI think it's great how you managed to describe this perfectly and get the point across, even though you couldn't use a lot of words. |
| AK the Twilight 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThere are definitely some cool descriptions here, like "billions of metal structures rusted from years of neglect," and considering how difficult your challenge must've been, you really did a great job. The few words manage to tell a mysterious story, despite their scarcity. You have a talent for making plot from such few resources, and although I found your other works as more in-depth, this was interesting to say the least. You did well with this. Thumbs-up. |