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| Deirdru 2008-05-17 ch 2,  | abuseI, personally, prefer dead boy to living boy, but I simply enjoy dark, depressing angst and things like that. I liked the alternate ending, though :) -Deirdru |
| Deirdru 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseThere were some sentences that I had to read multiple times before understanding completely what you were saying, but I found this quite and interesting and well-written place. Sometimes, in sentences such as 'The bird called mournfully again, a solitary cry that echoed emptily.' I believe you describe a little too much, and I think you alluded a lot to the birds crying, but I still really enjoyed this story :) Now, on to the next part! -Deirdru |
| JustWantAnAnswer 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseLove this story. LOVE. It completely swept me in when I was reading it at your house. I prefer the darker ending, though. |