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| Detective CelestialGazer42 2008-05-11 ch 6,  | abuseIt's good, just mistake here and there. |
| Detective CelestialGazer42 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseReally, pretty good, except for the spelling and grammar mistakes. |