Reviews for his name is mitch

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2008-04-21
ch 1,

abuseNo, honestly, this one was good. This was really good.

Shift+enter = line break, but no double space.

Okay. So there are a few typos in this one still. The lack of apostrophes is driving me insane. Fix it, dammit! =] Also, you mispelled "tinny" (tiny).

Shut up and be confident, dammit. Honestly. You did really well until the end. The end was atrocious. Look, I know you're not so sure of yourself like you seem to think everyone else is (trust me, we're not--well, McKenzie maybe but she's a **, you wouldn't want to be like her would you?), but if you stop thinking that no one will ever be interested in you... things might change a bit. Honestly. I wouldn't lie to you, I wouldn't try to make it sound better than it really is.

It's Mitch. If he wasn't interested in you at least a little bit, he wouldn't even waste his time on you. He's one of THOSE people, I know it. There's something about him. If he didn't actually care about your conversation or want to talk to you, he wouldn't.

Lighten up dear. Things will get better.

Love you. (-sticks out tongue- & so does MITCHEL!)

-stix-

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