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| Limegreenqueen 2008-06-30 ch 11,  | abusereally good :) |
| ArghImaPirate 2008-06-05 ch 11, | abuseFINALLY THE GAME IS OVWER :) i cant believe they killed roseanne though...wow |
| Haley Hardcore 2008-06-04 ch 11, | abuseawesome story i love it cant wait for the next chapter :) |
| Queen of Laughs 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abusepost asap! cant wait to see whats going on!! :D |
| StarEyed14 2008-05-18 ch 10, | abusethat was great! -stareyed14 |
| Dramaqueen-is-me-14 2008-05-16 ch 9, | abuseReally good! |
| StarEyed14 2008-05-16 ch 6, | abusewow you update fast! lol. still a great story, stareyed14 |
| Dramaqueen-is-me-14 2008-05-15 ch 8, | abusegood! |
| Hoodlives 2008-05-15 ch 8, | abuseI loved this!! I’m really eager for more! |
| Hiddengirl10 2008-05-15 ch 8, | abuseYour NOT going to fast at all with your updates ... I wish more people would update just as fast :D ... Well, can't wait to see the next chapter! |
| Limegreenqueen 2008-05-15 ch 8, | abuseok i loved this chap ter and thanks for answering my question so fast i was gone for two hours and it was a pleasant surprise when my email told me that the story had been updated and you had responded. however this chapter seems out of place i thought the game ended last chap? is it a series of games? doeas grant have to win the championship to win lily? karla |
| ArghImaPirate 2008-05-15 ch 8, | abuseI'm waitng for it to be over...and her family is NUTS. |
| JoBen 2008-05-15 ch 8, | abusethe descriptions of what is happening is good as are the descriptions of the people. the dialogue is realistic. I think a little too much time has been spent on the card game and getting down to the last two players. you promise more action after the poker game so I anxious to see the story get to that part. |
| Limegreenqueen 2008-05-15 ch 7, | abusethis chapter was really good keep writing i can't wait until you finish... the filler chapter like you said was necessary and and it did slow down the story give the readers a chance to reflect so that i can remeber the story well you kno i love it but my question is why is lily's sister killing all of these ppl she's wierd but every story need a villian karla |
| phelps112 2008-05-14 ch 7, | abuseI kind of like Rosemarie, even if she is kinda evil. |