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IlfirinEstel
2008-06-14
ch 1,
abuseOh, man. This kinda makes me laugh, if only because I've been here so many times about my own girl-I-just-can't-quit. You've done a great job of showing what that's like. I seriously relate.
painted.music
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abusekonban wa

An adorable ending. I know it wasn't supposed to be cute per se... but that's just how I saw it. :)

"Like thinking about how I never think about you anymore." -- Can I add that last stanza to my quote book, please? I loved it. :D

Ha det
-Shan-

P.S: Nice new penname.
she smolders
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseThe honesty in this breaks my heart - so full of hurt and regret and strength. I really like how you use nature scenery but in the end it all leads back to your special someone. We've all had someone we had to get over once and this reminds me of the one I am fully over of now.

Take care.
-Hope- In the Name of Love
2008-04-18
ch 1,
abuseThat was awesome. I understand, totally. -faves-
kelsi bones
2008-04-18
ch 1,
abuseWow. This is so amazingly powerful. The last line shows how you really feel in a subtle way.

I've been in this exact situation, so i can relate to this piece so much.

*Faves*

k.S
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