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Reviews For: A Boat at Sea

PheonixLament
2008-04-18
ch 1,
abuseeveryone says the metaphor of the boat, on the "sea of life...blah blah blah" is very cliche, but not in this case. I think your poem is very original. Great imagery "Licking the salt off my fingertips," I could taste salt. Great poem.
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