|Reviews for A Boat at Sea|
| reaching-for-sunlight 7/19/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful imagery. :)
| PhoenixPhilosophy 4/18/08 . chapter 1
everyone says the metaphor of the boat, on the "sea of life...blah blah blah" is very cliche, but not in this case. I think your poem is very original. Great imagery "Licking the salt off my fingertips," I could taste salt. Great poem.