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| Lionesscouer 2008-05-08 ch 5, | abusevery nice story so far. I like the mysterious build up of whats coming. Look forward to finding who this Matt guy is as well as see how Jace and Kaya end up in the eventual situation they're in. |
| AmberMarieee 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseHoly wow. This is really amazing. You hooked me from the first word and now I have to keep reading. I love how you described everything and yet still left a lot for the reader to wonder about. It's an incredibly well-written beginning, and i love it. |
| AK the Twilight 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseDrakenville looks to be a haunting and ominious little town. This opening is full of sinister metaphors and descriptions. The final two lines deliver an extremely intense clincher. Although this project is just beginning, I'm eager to see what secrets this Drakenville is hiding. Sounds like an interesting town. Great job overall. |