LOL cute!

xx

Wow, that was absolutely beautiful.
Especially the ending.
I've seen alot of stories with the same ending, a baby coming, but this is quite possibly the sweetest one I've read yet.
Great job!
Loved the story!

I love that little ending, "let's kiss."
Sorry, I had been caught up with other stuff but I'm finishing up reading this.

I really enjoyed this story good job!

ha! i knew daniel was mr richards!! :D
too bad it's finished :(
awesome story , fellow victorian! :P

Yay!! Interesting how the obvious faults in Daniel and Eleanor only enhance their love for each other. Very interesting. And I still love Rita, even more now, and I'm glad I decided to continue to like her despite her extremely rude behavior. Well written story, and a great ending!

“Happy baby shower,” he whispered into my ear, and moved his hands over my stomach, stroking it, “you big fat beautiful woman.” that was LOLS seriously...GReat story! rita ended up marrying trent huh?

i love it!i am so going to have to g oback and read it for the helo of it becuase it is amasing. i love it and it is so unfair it is finished. never mind

:O its finished

I'm so sad
Its terrible
BUT
i'll forgive you because it's such a wonderful ending.

I still don't think much of Rita but whatever you know.
And american dragon jake lon(g?) is GREAT. i like the uncle/grandpa fellow (not the doggy one, even though he's majorly cool)

I'm so happy for well Everyone, even Patricia..a little...and kinda for trent. in very small amounts.

It was great and wonderful and yeah

WOO


Kat.

This is soo cute!!loved it!
this is truly a beautiful story..
kweel!!

That was lovely. You really do have a talent for tying thing off nicely.

lol, i actually have no idea if you're a melbournian, im just hoping x)
so i really should've said in my last comment: "good story fellow australian!"
well, anyway,
i think mr richards is daniel :)

this is a really good story, fellow melbournian!
lol, once i DID chuck my popcorn box at a group of boys and girls being too loud in the cinema
you should've heard them swearing and a bunch of people telling them to shut up
it was hilarious xP

OH my GOD
theres a sequel to CINDERELLA STORY?!
no way!
i loved the first one. must see.must see.!
the epilogue was awesome!
i love how you put little twists at the most random places :D
welldone!
^_^

SO CUTE !! worth the 17 chapters to get here. I'm proud of you and Trent got what he deserved. Muahahaha. I guess Rita isn't so bad after all.