 3DarkLove3 2009-10-25 . chapter 1Aww =3 That was cute and light-hearted. And it's really cool how you used mostly dialogue to convey the characters. Not many people can do that well enough that the readers get a really clear view on the characters personality's. And, although it's never actually stated, you can just tell they're a couple, just by how they act. Another tough thing to do without outright stating it. Really well done! =))
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 Xara Nahara O'Connor 2009-08-04 . chapter 1Heh. This is sort of funny. It's not too heavy-handed, and it is a cute, little skit about what happens at exam time. I can totally relate. This actually reminds me of when my friend and I start acting around exam time. He would be the male in this story while I would be the female with big dreams and such. Good job. It would make a great drama. |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-03-20 . chapter 1Really cute. And fun to read. :) |
 jj 2008-12-15 . chapter 1 haha=D cute |
 live.laugh.write 2008-11-03 . chapter 1hm...
kind of a slow start, but I admit I am very interested!
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 Spurlunk 2008-09-10 . chapter 1I just read about half of your story on Layal and Ryder - it's very well done. This piece is really nice too - funny!!
Review my stories too? =) |
 Heloise 2008-07-17 . chapter 1LOL. That cracked me up.
I love couple's banter.
They were pretty funny. |
 Let Them Eat Cake 2008-06-12 . chapter 1Cute! Just random fluff! But well-worded and lovely random fluff! Great job!
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Kay |
 PrincessNancy 2008-05-07 . chapter 1Ahh, this is a promising start!
Please update soon!
lol Osmosis and Vasodilation and Vasoconstriction.. Reminded me of Bio. lol I used to love Chem and Bio classes! :) |
 Lily Llynn 2008-04-28 . chapter 1I wish we had seen more romance, but this is hilarious and cute, and I love it, and I love the wicked monkey for adding it to OUR c2. (: Hope to see some more additions from you too, hehe. (: |
 d666lisa 2008-04-25 . chapter 1Very cute story :) |
 Lulu 2008-04-24 . chapter 1 Very cute ^_^ This creepily reminds me of the banter between my boyfriend and I, and the fact that my name is Louise makes it even weirder o_O XD |
 asylum writer 2008-04-20 . chapter 1Review marathon - link in profile.
I liked how it was almost entirely dialogue. That worked really well for this and added to the humor.
I love the humor in it. It was well done and I think part of that comes from the personalities of the two characters. I don't want to say they're conflicting, exactly, but it's the way she's so concerned with studying and he doesn't care about it. |
 Vanilla Tea 2008-04-19 . chapter 1That was so hilarious, I loved it! Thats funny, I just had a quiz a while ago and osmosis was on it... anyway, their relationship is really funny, and adorable. I think there's a typo in "donations," there's a / in the middle of it.
courtesy of the review marathon, link in profile if interested. |
 Written 2008-04-19 . chapter 1aww, that was adorable! so real and so funny. |