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| Heloise 2008-07-17 ch 1,  | abuseLOL. That cracked me up. I love couple's banter. They were pretty funny. |
| Let Them Eat Cake 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseCute! Just random fluff! But well-worded and lovely random fluff! Great job! =D Kay |
| PrincessNancy 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseAhh, this is a promising start! Please update soon! lol Osmosis and Vasodilation and Vasoconstriction.. Reminded me of Bio. lol I used to love Chem and Bio classes! :) |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI wish we had seen more romance, but this is hilarious and cute, and I love it, and I love the wicked monkey for adding it to OUR c2. (: Hope to see some more additions from you too, hehe. (: |
| d666lisa 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseVery cute story :) |
| Lulu 2008-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery cute ^_^ This creepily reminds me of the banter between my boyfriend and I, and the fact that my name is Louise makes it even weirder o_O XD |
| asylum writer 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseReview marathon - link in profile. I liked how it was almost entirely dialogue. That worked really well for this and added to the humor. I love the humor in it. It was well done and I think part of that comes from the personalities of the two characters. I don't want to say they're conflicting, exactly, but it's the way she's so concerned with studying and he doesn't care about it. |
| Take the Money and Run 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was so hilarious, I loved it! Thats funny, I just had a quiz a while ago and osmosis was on it... anyway, their relationship is really funny, and adorable. I think there's a typo in "donations," there's a / in the middle of it. courtesy of the review marathon, link in profile if interested. |
| Written 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseaww, that was adorable! so real and so funny. |
| writingxonxwalls 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseAww, I loved how most of the oneshot was in dialogue. I love stories like that, but I seem to find them more on fanfiction then I do on fictionpress which is unfortuante. I also adored their personalities. It was a short oneshot, but I really got a great idea of who each person was, and what kind of personality they have. Awesome-ness! (: -Brittany ps. from the review marathon! go to my profile to get a link to the review marathon! |
| Zonne 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseI did like it, very much. Cute and charming and sweet. I like her explanation about BIG ... big world, big things, big challenge... so true Is " dollar do\nations to " intentional? I think the \ doesn't belong. Also, some reference to who is talking in some of the dialogue would help. It works as is, but that might help a bit where the bantering goes on. Good job The ReView MarAthon Zonne (link in profile) |
| GrannyP 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseOkay, that was hilarious. Even girls can find humor in mentioning farts randomly in conversations. |
| angels and effects 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was very adorable! It brings me back to Bio class 2 years ago too, ahaha. I loved it :) Besides the fact that it involves my first name too, ehehe... Cheers to osmosis and water potential gradients! |
| under the bed 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abusehehe cute |
| Dandelion Cupcakes 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseAhaha... i lerve it... so random =] tehe |