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rippling iris
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abusei love school, don't you? this poem is very stark but very realistic as well. great job!
Sonora the free
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseThat definatly fits with my high school. Especially the part about secrets. And that part about loving yourself, it's so easy to be insecure. But that doesn't always apply. I like the lines about pimping for some reason...but I don't know what that reason is as of yet. And yeah, the drama sucks. Hardcore. Yet for some reason, so many people feed off of it to, even the ones who say they don't do it just a bit, so long as it doesn't involve them. Then there are the ones who need it like air, food.

*faves it*
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