Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Melody in C minor

YouNeverKnowThinkItOver
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseWhen I read this, I had the strange feeling that I knew this from somewhere. Then I realized...it's almost just like my life. But that's how I'm interpreting this. This has really made me think.

p.s-love the correlation between this and the C minor

: ) YouNeverKnow
phoenix6787
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseThats a powerful piece of writing...definitely written in a minor key (and C minor is oh so pretty...on the piano at least). Upon reading the title I had to go looking for my favorite C minor piece...Frederic Chopin Nocturne in C minor seemed to fit it rather nicely.

You have such depth to your writing, I think thats why I enjoy it so much. Even this piece which appears to be highly personal, you take the risk and put yourself out there. Whether it be an outlet...or that demon possessing you, keep writing. I think its a gift. On a final note, a line in that piece really struck me "I had asked you not to fall in love with me…but you are a stubborn one". I identified with that A LOT and learned that it can't be controlled, it just happens. Wish I had some wise thing to say, but I really don't. Just hope things turn out ok.
chibichoco
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseWow... very well written. I really get what you're saying... :)
Harley Quinn Davidson
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseYou know the part about the caged demon, I understand. It seems to me that you are able to write my feelings that I can not. It is a very powerful thing love, it changes everything. Keep writting, its good.
briannathewriter
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseI remember the first time a girl said she loved me I went into a panic. What's bugging ya?
Return to Top