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| a bitter kiss. 2008-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseI liked this so much. It's like... despite all the bad things thrown at us (the blood), we'll still move on in life (flowers still grow). Did I get the meaning right? Haha, but then again, that's the magic poetry - it's meaning is subjective to everyone. :) Good poem! |
| One-Hand Clap 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseOh! I absoloutely adored this poem! Firstly for the imagery - most prominently the imagery evoked in the first few lines. I could imagine it in my head! I also love it for its message, that rung so clearly in the last few lines. It really chilled me - the imagery of daises fed blood waste growing more beautiful, as if something innocent absorbing waste can turn it into something beautiful. It's lovely! and favourited. - Clap Trap, from Review Marathon (link in profile) |
| Shadow Whirlwind 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseQuite a thought-provoking piece. Loved it. ~Shadow |