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| awkward giraffe 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abusei really like this. i like your imagery. i like how your third line reminds me of geometry and people. i like your second like because high school really is a masquerade. i like your last line because it just reminds me of the pregnant girl i see in the hall every day and how the life she knows is dying, but she is still carrying that bit of life in her uterus. -giraffe. |
| rippling iris 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abusehuh this really made me think. it seems like adolescence is really just waiting out the worst years of your life. you know, you're always thinking about what you'll do when you're done with school, when you can have a life of your own, when you're out of this town. but this poem made me think "why not live now?" |
| Lain-y *wink* 2008-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseO.o whoa. nice imagery. is this that poem you were talking about? |