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| Creating a Dream 2008-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, hon, that's beautiful! so intensely felt... it makes me cringe. your imagery is as straightforward and truthful as ever, and I really like how you made one word in each stanza bold. it's a very nice technique!! good job, keep it up. live, laugh, love. Creating a Dream |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseGood piece, I like it :) Very strong. Faith |