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Creating a Dream
2008-04-21
ch 1, anon.
abusewow, hon, that's beautiful! so intensely felt... it makes me cringe. your imagery is as straightforward and truthful as ever, and I really like how you made one word in each stanza bold. it's a very nice technique!! good job, keep it up.

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Creating a Dream
Faith Adeline
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseGood piece, I like it :) Very strong.
Faith
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