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| Julius Gillian 2008-05-18 ch 1,  | abuseWell Mags, I read this and I felt the passion in each line, I had to read slowly because it was mostly cryptic. Like I said earlier nothing made sense to me, but its like I was listening to something really important. You managed to wipe the smudges away a bit when you decoded the 'me' and I was honestly really looking for that about me. This to me, I guess, is a poem about despair and nothing at the end of the rainbow. It all seems shallow, the way people act. Writers, poets, how we feel and our emotions are tossed because we're sensitive and nobody seems sensitive to the subtle nature we live our lives by. |
| Lain-y *wink* 2008-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abusebut what is his charade to begin with? that is the question. |