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| Lain-y *wink* 2008-05-03 ch 3, anon. | abuse...you know, it's at times like these where i seriously consider trying to get you to move here and get adopted into my family. seriously. All that aside, i miss talking to you, and i'm worried about you, no matter how many times you tell me not to worry. i'm only saying all this now 'cause it's kinda been building up, and it's one of the sure ways i can reach you. good chapter, but it made me sad. I'm glad you don't have to deal with ur ex anymore, but poor Anna-Chan...does she get a super awesome friend-y type person who she can vent to (points to self)? >.>;; but yeah. stay strong, mkays? *huggle* i dunno. it turned into a rant. i'm sorry. ^^; |
| Simply Put 2008-05-03 ch 3,  | abuseWait so she consented to the sex? Or was it rape? Matt is dead OMG! I didn't know Alex would go that far as to KILL somebody Plus he ripped up her pictures! I think he's really obsessed with her lol. Nice chapter. Really suspenseful. |
| Simply Put 2008-05-03 ch 2, | abuseGoodness, he's such a shady figure! I really liked this chapter. Things are getting murkier and murkier in the plot. |
| Simply Put 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI like the style of your writing, it's really unique. Alex sounds so mysterious. And I'm positive he's emo lol. |
| Danni 2008-05-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseI actually really like this story, despite it being formatted in a way I don't normally like. Keep it up, I'm dying for the next chapter. |
| eja-SAN 2008-04-19 ch 2, | abuseagain, another wonderful chapter |
| Lain-y *wink* 2008-04-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseso it does...and it's very good. >.> |
| eja-SAN 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseSonora-- This is wonderful, I can't wait for the next chapter, or however many chapters there will be. The only thing I have to say is, check spelling and some grammar. |
| Lain-y *wink* 2008-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abusei like this. you're getting some of this off your romantic life, ne? it makes sense; writers write what they know about. ^^ |
| losing gracie girl 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abusei really like this. i want to know what happens next. keep it up! yours until the wind changes, gg |