This is amazing!
I love all the discriptive words!
good job:)

I love the very natural, unforced sound that this has - as if it was no struggle at all to write it in sonnet form. I also found the title very thought provoking; it is interesting to connect the ideas in your poem to cigarettes. The last line weaves the two ideas together well.

I like this.
The title made me think it would be about cigarettes...
duh
but when I read it ... it felt like a relationship as healthy as cigarettes.

Anyway, i think the imagery is excellent,

Yet I’ve learned, as my faith in you’s thinned,
To esteem your words as smoke on the wind.

and this ending rocks

Excellent, but still, the title confuses me a bit

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OMFG. ITSA SO PRETTY -drools-
like you make me want to
throw eveything i know about
poetry out the window.


this is lovely suki. just lovely.
love it. keep up teh mad skillzorz~