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Moondog Dozier
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseThe process and the hope of a spark. It is a constant struggle. I always feel that there is some masterpiece, or at least a personal gem, hidden somewhere in the bottom of a drawer somewhere. I write on napkins, and it looks like the pen was crying when I get caught in a thunderstorm. It makes no sense when I return to it, and try to recapture the words. Muses sleep late sometimes, or become napkin tears. Not making sense now, I'll end this review. MD:77.
.mate.feed.kill.repeat.
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseThe ending made me giggle. It's like the way I think after geometry tests... kind of. I liked all the strange things you said like "pulling Band-Aids / off hippos and drowning your sorrows / in milk and cookies."

I like how you keep mentioning your handwriting. I love when people talk about their own handwriting. I think I'm the only person on the face of this earth that likes her own handwriting.

I really liked the ending. It was the best part.

-stix-
Random-Idiocity
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseExcellent piece, I love your choice of words makes great imagery. Keep it Up!
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