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| LoveOutLoud 2008-04-21 ch 3,  | abuseAnd your readers will be sufferin' by hearing there are no Soffruns... |
| LoveOutLoud 2008-04-21 ch 2, | abuseI like the repetition! (Sorry these reviews are short, but I believe they get the main point across!) |
| LoveOutLoud 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! Great use of imagery and alliteration, especially with the line "Twisting twining turning away / But all lead back to the trunk." Good job! |