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| Millilicious 2008-05-16 ch 1,  | abuseThis was a great poem! I'm so glad that there was no set rhyming pattern, and you weren't forcing words to rhyme. It was very insightful, a job well done! :-) Mil |
| PheonixLament 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abusethis sort of reminds me of my poem "journal entry." I think most girls have experienced this feeling. Liking someone who doesn't even notice. Simply put, this feeliing sucks. But i like the way you put it better. "repression is my defense mechanism of choice," because repression is not good, there is no need for defense in this situation, and it's not really a choice, is it? love it. |