 StoicCrying 2008-12-15 . chapter 1love em'! |
 frogs of war 2008-10-25 . chapter 1I wouldn't want to be on Drew's bad side.
The hospital scene feels a little rushed. It seems to me it would be fairly emotional, but I don't feel it. Maybe the action to thought/feeling ratio is a little off.
Cute though |
 Tobyk947 2008-06-17 . chapter 1Aw! It's...wow. I loved it. |
 Shindo Shuichi 2008-04-24 . chapter 1Aw I think that this story deserves a review!
Kinda cute... "Girlie **". XD
Write more... I'll probably read this again... but the weird thing is that there were a few parts in the story that didn't make sense cause of grammar X.X""
but i still liked the story! Drew... LOL bully :S
Shindoo ;D |
 golden eyes 2008-04-20 . chapter 1 loved the story, it was sweet yet definaty fun. good on you |
 .... 2008-04-20 . chapter 1 I hope you make a sequel to this! It would be GREATLY appreciated!! |
 .... 2008-04-20 . chapter 1 Wow! This was amazing! I loved it! Loved it! I love Chase, and Drew! They're just meant to be, and you wrote it beautifully. Although you could fix the spelling mistakes, and other mistakes. Apart from that, it was beautiful! Haha, I think I exclaimed that too much, and you get the point :P. |
 outsidersgirl 2008-04-20 . chapter 1this is good |