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Little Miss A 2009-04-20 . chapter 1
how wonderfully haunting!
fatbird33 2009-02-02 . chapter 1
this flowed really well. nicely done:)
HauntedMisery 2009-02-01 . chapter 1
simply beautiful .
not sure yet 2008-10-02 . chapter 1
this one is very intimate, and quiet and sad
gracie.domingo 2008-08-12 . chapter 1
some people are really hard to forget.

i like the sentiment.
softersin 2008-06-11 . chapter 1
WOW !
This is simply amazing.
I can relate.
keep it up :)
dollface and her cancer 2008-05-29 . chapter 1
that feeling we all want to capture. lovely.
thursdays and rain 2008-05-28 . chapter 1
lovelove the sentiment ;)
laughter at the funeral 2008-05-18 . chapter 1
the first line is so whimsical. but i think ive read better ones from you. ^_^
four winds 2008-05-02 . chapter 1
wonderful. I especially like this: "Your hand in my own, helping/Me after the fall—a part of me/Still loves you, a part of me still /Yearns for you". I can definitely relate. I love the feeling this poem paints; longing, slightly, but kind of regretful. I dunno.

excellent job, though.
kaylajac 2008-04-21 . chapter 1
the title of this is just breathtaking. I don't even know why, but it's so pitch-perfect and draws you in right away.

well, being a wistful teenaged kid I guess I relate to this pretty strongly, but I think you absolutely captured the feeling. I like the bittersweet, nostalgic feel to it all.

first word of the third line should be 'Your' not 'You're', a little typo I guess. and just two recommendations- the use of 'doll' at the end of the first line just sorta throws me, it seems a little gaudy and vaudeville-ish compared to the conversational tone of the rest of the poem. and also, capitalizing every first line [even when it was still the same sentence] seemed to break the flow.

beautiful poem, as usual, you are such an amazing writer :]
a silenced revolution 2008-04-20 . chapter 1
The flow is excellent, quite rhythmic.

I like the concept of one's smile glowing in the dark.
However -- 'You're smile' & 'You're hand' -- this person is a smile and a hand? I can't tell if this is an error or something more complex that I don't understand.

Overall I like it, but seems like it almost needs just a little more, just something more original to finish it and give it more impact.

.adrian.
Aquafied 2008-04-20 . chapter 1
not quite as haunting as your usual pieces
much more simple
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