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| Sanity's Brink 2008-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseI really, really like the way you describe a leader, but once again, this is a run-on sentence, not a story. I don't know if you write poetry or not, but this could seriously make an incredible poem. SB, courtesy of the review marathon (link in profile if interested) |