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Reviews For: An Alleyway in Providence

emeraude-irlandais
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseI love your flashes of the humanity of the everyday person, how you force the reader to acknowledge that each cashier, driver, pedestrian is a being unto themself, with problems and revelations that are the same as everyone else's in their existence, but simultaneously unique to that person. Sigh. Still hopelessly in love with your work, as always. Maybe someday I'll just sit down for an entire weekend and go through all the pieces I missed, but I might drown in imagery and awe (which might not be such a bad way to die).
Aquafied
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abusethe ending has so much meaning
very much do you tell a story
of someone else, somewhere else
it's beautiful
Exuberant Lemon
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abusevery nice.
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