Interesting concept. Drew seems idyllic, though we don't know him well. Nice little short.

This is ridiculously good. I know it is just a once shot but it would be an interesting dynamic to put into a longer work. Then again, maybe that would ruin it. Nice work.

Aw, that was so cute! But you should've written more to it than a one-shot. I would've loved to read more.

I like this, but you could continue it and make it a story instead of a one-shot!

Wow, this is really good. It could turn out to be an awesome story if you're planning on continuing it (which I hope you are lol). Anyway, you've got a good thing going here.. Hope you write more on it :)

You have a really cute story here. I think it's great that she managed to meet someone with so much chatacter in a bar of all places. You made Nick seems really cute, too. Too bad it was only a one-shot, I think you could have made a good story with this as well. Overall, it's really good.

Aw. I felt like you should continue on the story. It left me hanging. :]

This story has a great start. I definitely think you should work on evolving it into a chapter story!