Wow, very powerful. Such a unique topic to address in poetry, but an important one.

I like your wording. It's descriptive, but not in a sexual way, and addresses the more emotional aspect of the issue.

[empty air between my legs]
I like that line. It kind of shows the general emotional emptiness aside from the literal meaning.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

This poem is very powerful. If it's about you, I completely respect the sort of things you have to go through. I am lucky enough to have men and women in my life who have gone through similar things, and they feel the exact same way. Good luck with everything if this is about you, and remember, for all of the jerks out there who want to stop you, there ARE people who will support you.

short but meaningful.

Efficient images.

I think maybe this and the other one might make a good collection.

I like this one best actually.. calling them tumours is such a powerful and morbid image that is just perfect. Awesome job.

This seems like the kind of poem (or haiku I guess) that just comes to you one day (in a second) and you're like "omagod, that's brilliant!" so you like rush to write it down. I dunno, but I adore it. And it's going on my favorites.

Peace & Love

westnedge ~> park

Excellant haiku! So many of them are just empty words (look at mine for instance) but there is a great power in this. Fitting something so big into so few words is hard, and you did a wonderful job.

Thanks for your lovely review, I'm glad to be back. :]

This poem works well as a haiku. It's short but so powerful--great job.

marie

i think i like this one better. amazing stuff.

rowan.

A man trapped in a woman's body. I like it, don't think I've ever thought of it in those words before.

(From the Review Game):

This was an excellent haiku. I really liked the overall sad empty atmosphere in here. The last line suggest (very effectively) that this was more than just a physical change. It's as though the person has lost a chunk out of his/her own soul.

Great piece, very good. One of the best haikus I've read on here :)
Faith

This was good, I'm usually not a big Haiku fan, but I think this summed it up!! Very good, but sad in a way too.

man, i love you.
best haiku ever.