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| Frail.Wings.Of.Vanity. 2008-05-12 ch 1,  | abusethis is so beautiful. the piano and music makes it important to me. thank you for writing this . People deserved to see this. ...are they both boys? sorry. this kinda ruins the effect of my review but i was curious. Very moving. I play the piano, do you? |
| xpeekaboo 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was actually very touching. I don't know if it's because I play the piano, or if it's shounen-ai or something else altogether. But I liked it very much. Although, I have to say, at the beginning, it was a little confusing. Because we don't know what happened at first, why he didn't speak--and even now, we still don't know what happened to his father, other than the fact that he's dead. But overall, it was great. `xpeekaboo |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseA beautiful one shot shounen-ai. It's different and refreshing from the normal boyxboy fiction here. I like the plot and the way you handled the characters. I'll definitely be reading more of your works from now on and as a fellow shounen-ai author I can say that you've done something that deserves a round of applause! If you wish, feel free to check out some of my works. You may like them. |
| TechnoPOP 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I loved it. |
| Azurra 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseVery nice and sweet. |
| baesonata 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI really liked that. It was so cute and well told and very original. I have to applaud you for this story =D |
| HisaHysteria 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseAw, that's sweet. Now I'm grinning like an idiot. :D It's so happy, I |
| Jumbie.Kaulitz 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI loved it- Beautiful. The voice of the one-shot was strong and enough to leave the words revolving around your head over and over again. Keep up the good work. |
| d666lisa 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseExcellent oneshot :-) |