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gulistanlik 2008-08-03 ch 6,	abuseHang on, why does she have a slight look of horror on her face? Cos Quincy left his number or cos he wants to read her story? gulistanlik
dulera 2008-07-31 ch 4, anon.	abuseReally enjoyed this chapter, especially since you made a different approach by making majority of it Rowan's POV.
dulera 2008-07-31 ch 3, anon.	abusePoor people... I wanted to hug all three of them in this chapter. Even the dad, even if he was being unreasonable. All that stress with the business doesn't make it surprising that he's acting that way.
dulera 2008-07-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhat impresses me most is the flow of your writing. No trace of big complicated words, a flaw some writers make when they try to sound more intelligent. This was easy reading, and I don't mean that in a negative sense. I think you started off great with Evie's dream cause reading that part had me liking her already.
withered-orchid 2008-07-31 ch 6,	abuseHaha I loved the sick dialogue! Actually I loved just about everything in this chapter. The content of it was rich and deeper especially when you wrote about Evie and Lily. I was wondering if you'd ever talk more about Evie's characters so I was happy when I read that. Sorry about your 'Evie phase' but it's great to know that you haven't abandoned this. The story is really good and it would be a pity to discontinue it.
withered-orchid 2008-07-31 ch 5,	abuseI have a bunch of questions but I have a feeling that you probably won't answer them. :P Mostly stuff about the characters since you've managed to draw my interest further over each one. Quincy especially at the moment.
LondonLi 2008-07-30 ch 6, anon.	abuseIt's been a bit of a wait; but I hope you're re-motivated like Evie is. I really love all these characters and am looking forward to their stories playing out, even Lily's! Thanks for putting up a decent length chapter too!
Zoromaru 2008-07-30 ch 6,	abuseNice
Zoromaru 2008-07-30 ch 5,	abuseLame soap opera. lol
Zoromaru 2008-07-30 ch 1,	abuselol, a meaning to a dream, absurd. lol. Other thne that the story is good so far.
BWeep 2008-06-06 ch 5,	abuseA tad dramatic, but fun and interesting all the same =) I'm just hoping no triangles form.
Coralem 2008-06-04 ch 5,	abuseGreat job again!! Gosh I can't wait for the next chapter.
Catty 2008-06-03 ch 5, anon.	abuse-gasp- Who's Thomas?! Is he an older brother or something? Quincy was awfully sensitive.. wonder what was up with him? Oh man I can't wait until the next update. Great job again! ^^
Catty 2008-06-03 ch 4, anon.	abuseQuincy and Rowan. God I can't wait for the future chapters and see how these two get along. I don't even know where to begin on what I wanna say about this chap. It being pretty darn good is the best way to sum it up. ^^ I still love Evie but the way you wrote this one just put Mozart, or shall I say Rowan into a whole new level of interest for me. And Evie's dream.. just, wow. It's so different from the more modern style of your writing with this whole story but it fits perfectly. Great job on the imagery!! ^^ Off to read the next chapter!
gulistanlik 2008-06-03 ch 5,	abuseHello hello! Interesting story you have here. I'm not exactly sure but I feel that Aira and Quincy will be becoming well acquainted in the future. Too well, if you catch my drift, hehe. I really do wonder what Rowan's problem is, it can't just be Carol, methinks. Well, I feel the story has barely begun, which is understandable seeing as this is only the 5th chapter. That being said, I would love to read on to see what happens. I felt so sorry for Evie! I just wanted to reach out and pull her into a big warm bear hug. To lose probably the most important support for what she does- her father- I mean he has no right to say that to her. Sure, nicely say what you think I guess, but he has no right to limit her life. Yes, it is probably the only life saving income but she can't just be limited to the pizzeria, can't he see that? He got to live a little, he should see that it's her right too. To make her own life. Hopefully her friends, and particularly Rowan (aka Romeo)will be able to get her into tip top shape and I have a feeling Rowan will be causing her inspiration juices to flow. Well, till the next chappie, gulistanlik

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